I received such positive feedback from my first pitch that I did not change very much. What stood out to me as important was being passionate about my product because that is what catches an investor's attention. I do not think any feedback I received was outright wrong or silly, but rather helpful. One person told me I should introduce myself and give a little more background information about B-fast, which I took into account.
Wednesday, February 17, 2016
Elevator Pitch No.2
week 7
I received such positive feedback from my first pitch that I did not change very much. What stood out to me as important was being passionate about my product because that is what catches an investor's attention. I do not think any feedback I received was outright wrong or silly, but rather helpful. One person told me I should introduce myself and give a little more background information about B-fast, which I took into account.
I received such positive feedback from my first pitch that I did not change very much. What stood out to me as important was being passionate about my product because that is what catches an investor's attention. I do not think any feedback I received was outright wrong or silly, but rather helpful. One person told me I should introduce myself and give a little more background information about B-fast, which I took into account.
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Hi Lauren, I think you did a great job with your pitch! I can definitely see this being a benefit to students, being available 24 hours. I don't personally live in Gainesville, but I am aware of the early business hours most restaurants have there. If I did live on campus, I can see myself utilizing your business for the late night study times. Great post! Here is the link to my blog if interested: http://rebeccamarrauf.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteHey Lauren congrats on completing your second assignment, I thought this was the hardest one in my opinion. I think your video was the most impressive one that I have been assigned to watch. The only thing in my opinion that I think you should work on is your background. It isn't the most impressive but the only reason I am saying this is because people have said the same about me.
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Lauren I love your business idea! I think that you did a great job at explaining your idea, and you seemed very excited when explaining your idea! The only advice I could give you is to slow down your talking speed, other then that it is perfect! If you would like to check out my pitch feel free! http://dillondunn.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-dillon-dunn.html
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